Cool City

Written by veronicaromm

Sticky sweat surfaces suddenly.

Water, winds wallow, wither.

Musty melting molten magma.

Cool coffee, cool café.

Heat harsh, hazy hangs.

Swarming subway smells surprise.

Arrive, abode A/C America.

Copyright ©2008 Veronica Romm

5 thoughts on “Cool City”

mohmed says:

June 13, 2008 at 11:31 AM

i love sexual.

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Bhanu says:

June 10, 2008 at 4:09 PM

When thoughts are presented in a beautiful way,experience speaks.. the whole story is expressed in a few chosen words.. a POEM is born.. Thank U Veronica..That’s a Lovely Poem!!

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veronicaromm says:

June 9, 2008 at 11:02 PM

@ Jannie Sue : Thank you so much. It is how NYC is in a heat wave. V

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Jannie Sue "Funster" says:

June 9, 2008 at 7:19 PM

I love this poem! Not an easy thing to do to keep the alliteration without conceit, but you captured each image and made magic happen.

Cool indeed!

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Billy The Blogging Poet says:

June 9, 2008 at 5:59 PM

Hey, you’re a pretty cool drink for such a hot day!

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